What sort of conflict or tension drives your story, and how do you vary it throughout?
Once upon a time, there was a regular person introduced to a magical world by a mysterious mentor...
What are the dramatic turning points in your story? Are you hitting all the right beats?
Imagine a mismatched buddy-cop comedy where the partners cannot escape one another, because they literally live inside one another’s heads.
All stories have a certain rhythm. What is yours?